考研英語寫作技巧精講與高分突破（簡體書）

Between one classmate gradue and fore classmate gradue, about 67.77% arrived whileabout 98.24% depavreal. They are energetic partrapants in a global encomy driven by theflow of work money and ideas. They prefer to come and go as opportunity calls them. Theycan manage to have a job in one place and a family in another we need them to imagine theUnited states as a place where they can be productive for a while without commtingthemselves to staying forever. The students need them to feel that home can be both here andthere and that they can belong to the school the best jobs with require workers to have moreand better education to make themselves above average.
Accommodating this chart of classmates in motion will require new attitudes anboth sides of the immigration battle looking beyond the chart of night or many meansopening up the middle ground and understanding that managing today requires work,including some that not easy to part parents in the United states.
得分解密：雖然加了題目，還是牛頭不對馬嘴。可以明顯看出是亂抄的。
Directions:
Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college, invitinghim/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.
You should include the details you think necessary.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
小作文評閱要點：
滿分10分，6分及格。
1.給分呈正態分布；
2.給分中值為6分；整體給分；
3.稱謂+落款1分；
4.寫郵件的目的（有效性）3分；
5.必要細節，如時間、地點等（有效性）3分；
6.語言、結構（如以Looking forward to your reply／comin9做信件結尾等）3分；
7.字數不足，降一檔；
8.一定要看清內容，不能僅憑篇幅和卷面給分。辨清郵件內容是否有下列情況之一：（1）抄閱讀理解；（2）抄翻譯；（3）背寫作培訓模板；（4）三明治型（相關／不相關內容夾雜在一起）。給分有據。